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The moon rose,
And i went out to play.
Under their nose,
and out of the way.

Creatures of the night,
Linger in the mist.
As the fire shines bright,
And we laugh in squeamish fits.

Your porcelain skin,
Shines radiant and bright.
Your soft black hair,
lustrous, in the light.

And i don't care what they think.
Exactly how i'm supposed to be.
I'll do what i like.
Because i am free.
Dont listen to anyone telling you who you can be.
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redsnow-adopt737 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014   Traditional Artist
Cool
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DevilsMatrix Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
The moon rose,
And i went out to play.
Under their nose,
and out of the way.

My favourite part was this first stanza. The rhyme
was nearly perfect, it caught me. There is a bit of
dodgey syllable wording here, but it all seams to fit
nicely despite it. Loving the mood, very sensual and
dark ;D

Sincerely -
The literature section stalker.
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AmberAudacity Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. I have trouble rhyming sometimes though.
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mehlissa Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
2,642 views, probably 2,640 views saying 'Wtf is blueblack doing in poetry?'
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ASwingandMiss Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Using an image that you do not own is infringement of copyright, as you have provided no proof of ownership nor cited any source, it is rather evident that you intend to steal this piece.

It has been reported for violation of copyright and unless it is taken down, further action will follow. I urge you to properly read the rules before using art that you do not own.
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Threat77 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
nice picture from google images
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BlueLotusKiller Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
I really like the poem! And the picture the girl's eyes are stunning. They are what attracted me to the picture.
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WallyTheWaffle Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012   Digital Artist
the girl in the pic looks like Alodia Gosiengfao. <3

Poem is cute. xD
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AmberAudacity Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!
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Benecry1342 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that poem and that picuture is just mesmerizing WOW =-D great job
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